100 Word Challenge…
…suddenly, darkness enveloped the room…
The day I got a new room it was like the main room suddenly my brother’s (Banson/Damian) was jumping all day. It’s like my bed has enveloped.
¾ days later
I was scared of the darkness even though the blue lights were on I was still so scared I so scared I started to cry mum said
“Miley are you ok come here would you like sleep with me ”
“Yes” I said crying
I got into bed I still couldn't sleep 10 minutes later I fell asleep it was moning
“Miley wake up get up get up” said Damian
Miley, we need to work on using full stops to end one idea before you begin the next idea. Maybe you could have described this new room you are sleeping in. What was it like?
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