Once upon a time, there was a baby princess Called sukhmeet. It was her birthday and her mum and dad had planned the biggest party in the whole wide world. Everybody was invited. But wait, is that the Witch of the West? Oh no She is cursing the baby. Abracadabra I will kill you and I will kill your village and I rule the world me haha. The king said attention. I will do anything, Then the witch said hmmm said the with. You will have to invite me to all of your parties. Mwahahaha. The king took a deep breath. Okay. yay finally. But on one condition. The condition is that you will have to respect the village. Okay? Fine. the years passed and the princess grew. In 2020 it was her 18th birthday and it was the day she left the kingdom. But she couldn’t leave because she heard that the king was dying. Her mother said you will have to be the queen. No-no-no. how will I be the queen? You will have to learn. But who will be the king? Don’t worry about the future, think about it now. Okay? Okay, mum. No, but. What is in takanini? But mum! Wait! What? The queen took a deep breath. You will have to be the queen of the village. Your village needs you. The princess said, okay mum. I will be the queen. Good. now on Wednesday, you will be crowned queen. Can you teach me how to be a queen? I think you already know how to. No, I don’t. Yes, you do know. It is like being a princess. I think you know how to be a princess. I know you know how to be a princess ahahaha
I know how to be a princess mum
No, I don’t
Yes you do
No
Yes! I do.
Sh, your dad needs some rest said the queen in a quiet voice.
Okay, mum. You need some rest off
Go to bed in your room.
Yes mum
But instead, she called her friend and said I hate my mum
I hate my mum too
Do you want to swap mums and dads?
Ha, yeah.
I will see you at 10:00 in the morning.
No
Ok, 5, yes good.
Bye-bye
Sukhmeet went to bed. In the morning her friend Zahra came to see her and she came with two wigs and some make-up. They put on the wigs and then they put on the make-up. They looked so different. OMG!
“You need to go to my house said, Zahra
Oh yes I need to go
Wait...when will I be crowned?
chapter two
You will be crowned on Sunday the 17th of July.
Bye-bye
On the way, sukhmeet saw her old friends Miley and Faliha. They were playing tag. Sukhmeet said hi.
Oh Hi, who are you?
I am sukhmeet
Hi sukhmeet
What are you doing here? Said faliha
I am doing something.
Do you need help?
No, I don’t need help.
Okay, bye-bye
Bye
“I need to go.” Sukhmeet got to Zahra’s house. “ Hi mum
“Hi,” said Leena, Zahra’s mum.
Hi dad
Hi Zahra said Chris (Zahra’s dad).
Hi sis
Hi Zahra said her sister Yazmin.
You’re not like this
I am always like this yazmin
Oh, I need to go to my room. Sukhmeet went to Zahra’s room. Ring! Ring! ring! Hi Zahra
Hi Sukhmeet. How are you doing?
I’m good. How are you?
I’m good too.
Shhhhhhh. My dad is coming.
Oh, okay
Bye said, Zahra
Hi dad said sukhmeet
How are you doing?
I’m fine dad. Tomorrow you are going to school.
Ha
What do you mean?
I mean you are going to school?
I know dad. You told me yesterday. I am talking to my friend said sukhmeet
Oh okay, I will go now.
Good morning your highness. Oh, I meant to say, dad.
Can you get me some tea, please?
Yes, dad. I will get you some tea.
Thank you sukhmeet
My name is not sukhmeet!...sorry dad said, Zahra
It’s okay sukhmeet. At 7:00 pm we will have dinner ok?
Ok, daddy.
Daddy, I will be out tomorrow at 5 pm and I’ll be back at 7 pm. Okay, dad?
Okay, Zahra said Chris. The next day at 7 pm “I need to go home now” said sukmeet. “Zahra needs to come back to her home. I will take the bus home. What I need is a bus card to get on the bus. Hmm, I will go to Zahra’s friend Aayaan. He might have a bus card or Miley and Faliha might have a bus card
No wate I am 18 Zahra is 17 her dad has a car I can drive home oh but it will take like 5 hours hmmm her dad might have an A T hop card, oh but I might have to top it up yusss
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ReplyDeleteThi story is a real adventure. Do you wish you were Sukhmeet?